Edward - crossfire - DL sketch

this took longer than I planned it to ... cause it is a scribble thing after all....
I really love how this turned out though ^___^- looked for information and references about how to hold rifles and found really interesting stuff.. I wish I knew more about firearms cause I'm so non-knowing.. does anyone know a nice website^^?
this is again a sketch concerning my planned doujin Distant Love where ed has to go to war and fight using firearms. and he gets shoot in the leg.. I hope I succeeded in drawing the wound .. can't draw blood.. I wish I could do it better.. and I hope ed's expression is like I intented it to be.. in fullview(by pressing download, not by pressing fullview) you can see it better I guess.^^ what do you think what his expression looks like?
comments would make me happy ^_^- hope you like it ^^ I'm proud of it^^

time: ~4-5h
medium: Open Canvas